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by sodapop0006

schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was adorable!! I absolutely adore the relationship between Silver and Jim, they're so cute, even it it is a really odd pairing due to species and size and whatnot, but they're so cute!! <3
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this :) I love this movie and these two characters. No smut, but still a lovely read :)!
person Kalira
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, it was very like the characters were in the movie, very well done! I could imagine it going this way in the actual movie. Oh, and the Comet-Riding was brilliant.
person Ascule
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story! For a minute there, it looked like Scroop was about to violently rape the poor kid... >_>
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Personally, I loved the bit about comet riding, and it fits perfectly with the universe. I thought you stayed on character very well with both (Except Scroop might not have been *quite* nasty enough.):D Keep up the good work.
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very well-written. I couldn't honestly say how in character it was, though. I only saw the movie, once, quite a long time ago. (although I remember being surprised by how well it turned out.) And when I saw that someone had written a story about it.. well... my curiosity got the better of me. And a good thing it did, too.

Great job. ^_^

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