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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!! Johnny and Reed would be hot together!!
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, sexy, hot... I loved it. The possibilities between these two.... *day dreams*....
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing makes my eyes bleed... please no more.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad..............
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I though the story was really hot. If anything I wish it were more graphic; I mean think of the possiblilties Mr. Fantastic can stretch his stuff to any length he wants. Johnny Storm was depicted great, very sexy.
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great storyline and start, but the pet names kinda sound weird in it. I don't picture them calling each other love and lover, nor Reed calling Johnny 'boy'. But it's really good so far. I think you should extend it.
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story! I really hope you write more, or at least a sequel. Great job, great job!!!
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hay! you made it!! i love this fic. and know people know what i'm talking about in my challenge Fic.