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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely written, I enjoyed it :)
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pure hotness!
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For being a one-shot, this was actually pretty good. Thre were a few places where it seemed that you accidentally left out a word, but hey, we're all human and I know I do that myself sometimes. Over all, yiou have my seal of approval and I hope you keep writing!
Best of luck go with you, and all the Muses.
Best of luck go with you, and all the Muses.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the feedback. I am quite encouraged and am in the process of turning out another story. I think this one will be dark. We will see what path it takes. I have a great Muse.