1) What is the relevance of "Now I Lay Me Down to Sleep" (by the way, "to" should be capitalized...)? I don't understand what it has to do with the story. I'm not trying to be rude, I'm just curious.
2) Shall I mark this under the category of abandoned fics? Because it's been a while since you said you were going to "revamp" it, and it's been even longer since you said you were going to post the last chapter. You should at least post an update so all your readers know what the hell happened to this story!
Great update! Very tender!
So one more chapter huh?
hhhmmmmm... i'm both happy and sad... ggrrrrr
P.S. I'm hoping for a sad ending ;-)
Keep up the good work!!! I love it!!
you are reworking the WHOLE STORY, but can we at least read the last chapter?