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for Tomorrow

by LadyExcalibur

person Lizzie
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!!! I love your fic, I really do, even if I i´m not a big fan of the Xan/Obi-wan pairing, I really enjoy reading your fic... please, continue with your great story!!!!
person adair
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're evil! Thanks to you and this delicious story, I've decided to expand on one of my Xanobi fics here. Loving this! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
person Loki
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know you! I'm loving this story, you wonderfully dirty old lady. :D Very sweet scene, but who could blame Obi for giving in just a little bit more? I don't!
person Anon
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very new, very intersting! i`m looking forward to the next chapter!
person Siarra
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good fic... I love the way you've managed to balance out the hot sex and the depth of their characters. Usually when reading these kinds of fics one gets the feeling that other is just the necessary evil but make it all come together very artfully. The development is also very good; it's clear that the time goes on but you don't make it seem hasty or draw it out unnecessarily, either. Now that Obi is starting to realize the nature of things, I'm sure things will get even better. Xanatos seems a bit off, in my opinion but love does funny things to people... It's just that now that he's stripped of his evil antics he has become a bit... dare I say nondescript?
I'll be sure to come and check more of this lovely fic.
person LadyExcalibur
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for all of the kind reviews. And I was deliberately vague as this will be a developing line in the story. There is a reason for this madness! Okay, a reason besides hot sex.
person Siarra
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really liked this fic. Usually the fics with this pairing are simple one-shots with a classically perverted and cheaply evil Xanatos but this one... It has plot and some real depth to it. It also sports a very good story flow, something I love in a good fic. And... It has some extremely hot and well written smut in it. I must admit, though, that I would like to have the setting a little less obscure; we know that Qui-Gon isn't around but there are other unanswered questions, especially about how Xan came to capture Obi since that comment about him spicing Obi's food didn't quite match how you started the story. Then again, it might be just me asking silly questions.
I'm going to keep an eye on how this great story continues so I hope you'll update soon.
person Taz
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very hot. Exactly the sort of story that is my guilty pleasure, this semi-non-con, reluctant lover thing. Keep up the excellent work.
person Angsty Freedom Fighter
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Hey, wow, not bad! This is a first for me. The first time I've stumbled across a Xan/Obi fic where Xanatos didn't just screw our hapless Obi-Wan and leave laughing malevolently like always, this story looks to have a long and good plot [not that all the other fics with the said coupling aren't good; granted they're good too, but...a PLOT! A plot that goes beyond 'screw and run away'...!] Cheers!! I do hope that you continue this. You already have me hooked, heheh. I'll be rooting you on~! --Angst
person ImaPseudonym
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Guh.. Corrupted youth... Very.. VERY.. Nice.

Of course, I do have an affinity for rooting for the.. 'bad guy'.

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