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Okay - First you make me fall in love with this lovely little fic, and then you disappear.

Not very nice. Not nice at all.

I'm going to go off and pout now. Hope you are happy.

--shan

I found you! Hehehe...

I don't normally read Xanatos stories cause I've never read the books that take place before TPM. I can't even remember what they're called...Jedi Apprentice? Anyway...

I liked this very much! You are really quite skilled at writing smut for someone who supposedly only started doing it recently. *wink* And I love the fact that Xan kidnapped Obi-Wan to prevent him from suffering the fate that he does in the movies. Now, I have to wonder...will Qui-Gon find them? And if he doesn't, what will this mean for Anakin? (You see, it always gets back to the Skywalkers for me, LOL)

Can't wait to see where you're going with this!!

Just letting you know there's some interest here :D I'm patiently awaitin' that next chapter. So take your time and hurry up. You left us with Obi starting to fall for Xan. Can't wait to see what happens next.

--shan

Great chapter!!! My, my, Xani can be so cute ^_^... but now I´m curious about Xani... so, anyway, keep up with the great work!!!

Awesome chapter! Finally- a breakthrough for both of them. The sex has been great in this fic - but I'm so anxious for more on an emotional level. For just a moment there I thought it was something else - the reason Xan took Obi. Like maybe Qui had taken advantage of Xan sexually when they were together and was afraid Qui would do the same to Obi. Curious as to what questions Xan will ask. The ending of this chapter was very satisfying - and sweet. I actually felt happy for both of them :) Great fic - keep up the good work.

--shan

Wow - what a delicious mixture of love and obsession. I was a bit worried at first, the age thing didn't bother me, but I'm not into non-con at all. Glad to see that isn't *really* the case here - though it could be argued.

I will have to thank Adair for the fic rec - it was well worth checking out. I'm rooting for Obi to just fall for Xan and i'm rooting for Xan to just let him go - which I'm thinking that is what it's going to take for Obi to actually trust Xan and let him have his heart.

But you threw a little curve ball in there with Obi's dream about Qui and calling out his name - just what is that supposed to mean? There seems to be a bond of sorts between Xan and Obi - but how will Qui complicate things?

Absolutely love the sex, but am getting worried about the obsession part. Xan has been patient so far, but I sense it wont last. Poor Obi, so confused and drunk - and while I have to admit the opening sex scene was undeniably hot, I(personally) found it conflicting. Xan wanted Obi at any costs and did take advantage of him, but i'm over analyzing :) I'm enjoying and will be checking back for more whenever I can.

Xan/Obi pairing is one of my faves, even tops Qui/Obi-so i'm thrilled to have found this. Great storyline. Keep up the good work.

--shan

Anything is possible... Hell, yeah!!!! .... sorry ^^'... I just love the way you writte, really, congratulations, I can´t wait for the next chapter ^_^

Caught up to Chapter 8 - lovely fic! Xan's both a mean bastard and incredibly affectionate. But you had to throw Qui-Gon into it, didn't you!

Loved this chapter. Xan was so deliciously scary in his possessiveness. But then who can blame him?

Hi there! I´m so glad that you are updating really soon, Thanks!!! Because I´m really an addict of your story.... and now more than ever ^_^