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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the hell? I think you may have skipped a chapter b/c all of a sudden Ani and Obi are together and Luke is born? What the hell?
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with the previous review. It seems that you skipped some chapters.
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always love those AUs in which Ani doesn't turn evil. Please continue soon! :-) Obi/Ani is the hottest pairing I've read in a long time. :)
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful fic! It's getting better and better! Oh, please update asap. :-)
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I like it, but it would be better if you had beta reader. there are some pretty bad mistakes, and it's ashame, because the story is fineexcept for thoes. And yes I do know I don't spell like a dream, english is NOt mi first language.