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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the last two chapters. I didn't mind the dialouge at all. Keep up the good work and please update soon.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You just had to stop it there didn't you:)!!! I really want to know what's going to happen next!!!!! The chapter was great I loved the new developments
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
T_T, I am sorry about your loss, I hope everything is well for you.
I might have a hard time checking up on your story as much as I do, because I don't have a computer, but don't worry: You haven't lost me as a reader! I love this story WAY too much!!! T_T!!!! *love all over*
Emotions and Characterization, as always, totally kicks ass. The story is still just as interesting, perhaps more by every chapter. I felt really bad for Obi-wan when he was hurt by the fact Anakin went to the Chancellor before him.
Good job as always!
I might have a hard time checking up on your story as much as I do, because I don't have a computer, but don't worry: You haven't lost me as a reader! I love this story WAY too much!!! T_T!!!! *love all over*
Emotions and Characterization, as always, totally kicks ass. The story is still just as interesting, perhaps more by every chapter. I felt really bad for Obi-wan when he was hurt by the fact Anakin went to the Chancellor before him.
Good job as always!
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My sympathies on the death in your family. I just discovered this story this evening and greatly enjoyed the 11 chapters posted so far. I especially like your peeks into the hidden depths of Obi-Wan's emotions. Too often is is portrayed as emotionless. I prefer the idea of those strong emotions and longings buried within, waiting for a release. I look forward to the next update.
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry for your loss. But the fic is wonderful as ever. I loved that Anakin told Obi-Wan about his feelings. This was so sweet. I wonder how they're going to get involved, and I can't wait! :-)
Please write more soon!
Please write more soon!
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really sorry about the death in the family. Glad you're back the chapter is a grand one indeed!! Can't wait for the next installment!!
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Please, sir. May I have some more." Please keep on writing. I want to know what happens next.
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Humorous and emotionally gripping! I will be checking beck periodically to see if you've updated this one!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohmygosh! That's just so.... so.... YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!!! I'll give you cookies! and milk! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease.... poor ani.... I want Ani/Obi. Ani on top! mew!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! And the slash begins to show.
Anakin is so innocent. :3. I really like how you have Anakin often mention that Padme is beautiful, rather than shun her completely. When ever he mentions her I wanna give you a high five because it makes the idea of Obi-wan x Anakin so much more believable. I can't wait to read more.
Anakin is so innocent. :3. I really like how you have Anakin often mention that Padme is beautiful, rather than shun her completely. When ever he mentions her I wanna give you a high five because it makes the idea of Obi-wan x Anakin so much more believable. I can't wait to read more.