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for Light In The Dark

by GreyPenInk

person Andrea
schedule December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, love the whole obsession with the smell of lust. I wish that came in a perfume. God, what a turn on. Please dear writer for my sake and my lust continue this story.

Andrea
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the sex scene in ch2 is mildly disturbing and god DAMN! is it hot!
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A TAIL??!! DUDE I LIKED YOU BEFORE BUT NOW I ADORE YOU!!!
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh very catching plot, hurry up with the next chapter..

Only problem seems to be random skips in time in chapt 1-2.
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I wonder if John is starting to develop feelings for Bally? I not sure if I want to see John be pregnant by Bally or verse visa. I’ve read other stories that involved them in that situation which still turned out pretty cool. But I like to see a break in that normal pace; this is just my personal opinion of course. Keep up the good work I can’t wait for the next chapter!!
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! HE'S PREGY ISN'T HE??? PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE MAKE HIM BE PREGY! ...because...becuase... me lovez pregy ^^
person amekan
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've just read this and want to say that it's a very good story. I'm curious as to why all the bite marks would react at the same time. Also, even though some don't like it, I think him becoming preggers would be funny, if just to find out the reactions. Please continue to update and I really look forward to reading the next installment.
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome story can't wait to see what happens next.
=)
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* nice i hope you haven't given up on this it seems like a good fic
person Tyrisha
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well that's a different version of the common phrase. i really hope you're continuing! i just get a kick out of any balthazar and constantine interaction but this time it was just fabulous

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