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for The Jedi and Senator

by icejadeus

person SkyeLight2x1
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please please please continue this fic -- it looks really promising, and I can't wait to read the
rest, or your other fiction. I absolutely adore Obi/Ani, and there's just not enough of it out there,
nor enough AUs. I love AUs because I hate that Anakin turned and I hate that he was injured so
badly, so I naturally love it when neither of those things happen. I really can't wait to read the
rest of this fic -- please update soon! And hey, just a thought, don't know if you need a beta
reader or not (couldn't see any mistakes, really), but thought I'd offer my services in that capacity
-- I like to help out, and its a fun thing to do.

Please keep writing, cause I absolutely love the plot bunnies that you've come up with/received!

Skye
person ranni
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ackkk please continue... soon i wanna know what happens. But great start!
person Lain Liffith
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH! CONTINUE PSYCHO!!!
person ae-ran
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaagh!! update! update! even though you're basically AUing Episode Two, i'm a total slash freak. Hmm. constructive criticism. Is Zett a boy or girl? Maybe you can have Zett and Ani compete for Obi's affections! hahaha ^_^ Oooh, maybe you can invent a new past for Obi...since he really dislikes politicians...hopefully that just gave you ideas...i know it just excited me...
person marie
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please add more this going to be good i can just tell.there are not many anakin and obi wan stories so please add more
person Elys
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is one of the best story, well chapter, that i've read!!!!!!!!!!!!! you have to write more, this is soooo cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this paring!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! their just sooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person sissy_you
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting twist, keep updating
person AH!
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! this is sooo good!!! please please update soon!
littlebitch, i love this story!!!!
my heen! please update please please
i love obi/aniken ...i ususally like aniken/obi but whatever works
person annonymous
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Question, is Anakin still the chosen one, or does the prophecy not exist? I'm just curious.
Anyways, I absolutly love the story so far and can't wait till you update, so please hurry up and update!
If not for just my sake, than for everyother poor sucker that just happened to click on this story and is now addicted.
Trust me, there's alot of us.
person Jainy Marie
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. I really like this so far. Please update it.... Please. I can't do a puppy face online, but imagine a puppy dog face. BTW, when you do update, could you e- mail me? luckylittleducky@sbcglobal.net or if you have AIM, IM me at rainyjainymarie. Thank you.

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