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for My Own God

by FloweringWolfsbane

person RamaKandra
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Er.... did we see the same trilogy?

Somehow, Smith bent over a desk and telling a randim-insert female "Oh yes, I have been very bad" kind of makes the head go splodey. I mean, if it turns you on, that's cool, we all have our fan-tasties. But whether or not the song fic itself is good..... it strikes me as wildly OOC. I kind of cringed in embarrassment, before clicking out of the story- it just.... eeeeee. Pulled me right out of it, 'cos my stomach was crawling. Some things don't translate well to being written out.

Not a slam, obv.- just my own subjective criticism.
person Selina Enriquez
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Opps - you are missing the rest of the cahper :-/
person Selina Enriquez
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very very kinky, Miss FW :)
person Selina Enriquez
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Something about the way she has said fun made him question her definition; blood, seeing him in pain, seeing him suffer…he shuddered, both in fear and in anticipation."

Yes, she is indeed a bit...cruel :)
person Selina Enriquez
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Bad, Bad Medicine"

LOL :D
person Selina Enriquez
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thomas Anderson. Ugh.
person Selina Enriquez
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a very movig story, like a rollercoaster :)
person Selina Enriquez
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Finished re-readingthe story. I must say that I look forwerd to Sequel - a lot.

You have so many talents. FW. I am so proud of you :)
person Selina Enriquez
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have decided to re-read the whole story again :)
person Selina Enriquez
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I love "The world is not enough"

Such a good choice :)

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