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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You MUST continue this story! So far, it's great and I can't wait to read more! The only thing that needs improvement is putting between the paragraphs, but other than that.....wonderful beginning!
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite the intense chapter.
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good! Exciting. I´m increasingly interested in this story, please keep posting!
Nic.
Nic.
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this. Nice hint of sexual menace and a bit of a surprise when the Agent doesn't use the situation to his advantage as is the usual outcome her on AFF. Curious to see why--is he repulsed at humans? has a conscience? has worse in store for her? Write quickly. ;)