rate_review Reviews

I really enjoy this story. Please continue writing it.

It wasn't to bad actually, the only thing is that it seems that you lead up to a point, and then present it after its been made obvious. We knew the woman was Jezebel (if I even spelled that right). The only other thing is that John knows the womans a demon (or so it seemed) and yet he left the kid alone with her. John may not like the kid but I doubt that he'll leave him to his death. Besides that I think that it is an awesome series, you should definitly not stop writing it.

This story is really good and I hope that you come up with a new chapter soon. I'm usually not interested in reading aloy of stuff, but this is good and I hope you continue. I desperatly want to know what happens, is causing me anxiety. Anyways, good job and post soon.

I love your stories so far, been reading the 2 previous ones before this. I really liked them especially how it stays true to the character which is totally awesome. Carry on :)

So, would I get Scooby points if I went through both stories and picked out the Buffy-isms? ;)

Only teasing. I really do like the stories. Keep going!