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schedule
March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woh.... very nice. I loved the explinations of his past aquisitions. And I love the twist at the end! Never expected that! Very well done, very well done.
schedule
March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>while the parrot repeatedly squawked
> “show us yer ankles” at any female over fifteen that they passed.
Oh, that is lovely! *burst laughing* So perfectly fitting. You should mail that one to the scriptwriters for the sequels.
> “show us yer ankles” at any female over fifteen that they passed.
Oh, that is lovely! *burst laughing* So perfectly fitting. You should mail that one to the scriptwriters for the sequels.
schedule
March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done. Another story that had a twist till the end. Nice to see that Jack is still alive in his old age and that Will still keeps in touch. Do you have more yarns to tell Jack??? Keep up the good work. I always enjoy your stories.....humor, action and a wee bit of the good stuff thrown in.....always a wonderful read.........Cruiser