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Dear Ishkibibbles,

I am glad that you think I am fucking awesome.......... as I think so too. *LOL*
And you are as well!!!

Thanks for the quick update, but I am so pissed right now at Alexander and Olympias for what they are doing to my Heph, that I am seeing red. They are really being downright evil, and I hope the Gods are watching and will painfully repay both Alexander and his mother for the deceit being practiced in their names.

I mean, Alexander has to be plain stupid to still go along with his mother. Heph knows what he has done, said that he hates him and he still want to keep the man against his will. I hope Heph makes his short time there with him a living nightmare. If he does impregnate Heph, can he make him carry and bring the child....are they going to keep him tied up or guarded every second of the day?

And I am also annoyed with Heph....he should have kept his mouth shut, used his wits, keep his cool and leave without them being any the wiser...taking his son with him!!! But I guess he was too hurt and angry to keep silent, with the knowledge bursting to be let out about what his lover Alexander and his witch of a mother did to him.

We need Heph to get some help here to safely get away and take his child with him, I would even accept help from Bagoas.


BTW, it would be so great if the snake that bit Heph poison him, and the toxins negatively interact with the portion and reverse its effects......in fact it should make Heph revert to all male again, and never be able to get pregnant ever. That would be such a wonderful payback.


Update soon...please.

Nice update....but where is the rest of the chapter???????????????? This is way too short.

I do hope that you are going to update soon with something much longer... Right?

I am happy that Heph got a chance to beat up Alexander a bit..but it was not enough...he didn't bleed, and it looks like Alexander is finally going to stop Olympias from meddling in his love life...about time!!!!

Anyhow, good chapter. Update quite soon.

Aww~~ I'm dying to know what Heph is going to do next, please update soon!!! >.<

please update soon. i can't wait to read what happens next!!!!!!!!!! your story is great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story, really love your Phai. Can't wait til the next update... Keep up the good work =)!

good work. wanna know what happens.

hey please update more! I really want to find out what hephaestion will do about alexander and olympia!!!!!!!!

I am happy that Heph is finally aware of both Alexander and his mother deceitful underhandedness towards him.

I hope that he uses strategy, wit and intelligence to thwart both of them. Firstly, he should be calm, pretend to take the potion and then sit back and watch everything unfold, and stop drinking Olympius potions. Then, he should strike where it would hurt most, leave Alexander and take his son Teodor and disappear. It is time that Heph forcibly take back himself and stop thinking of Alexander so much... afterall Alexander is not thinking of what is best for Heph...only himself. He is being totally selfish and self centered,

Great story. Wonderful chapter. Update very, very, very, very, very, very soon and make me proud.

BTW, if Olympius wants a daughter to girl talk with and dress up, let her go and get a real one from elsewhere.....Let her leave my beautiful but manly Heph alone!!!

Very nicely done. I am happy that Bagoas told Heph the truth or where to find it. It is time that Heph's eyes are opened and he sees Alexander and his mother for what they are...underhand and deceitful while sprouting words of affection and love.
Update soon.

I like this a lot, and I hope you get 6 more reviews soon!