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i changd my mind. i love bagoas. just get phai the hell away from crybaby and retarded-psycho-bitch, please!!!

hmm.. this submissive hephaistion is so not like him, wonder why Alexander didn't realize that there was something amiss!? and now he is leaving him with Olympias???? only gods know what her evil plans are! and there is this Bagoas who await for the moment to strike! I feel so sorry for Hephaistion and his children (a twins??? omg, this must be tough!!) but overall... AwEsOmE!!!!!! I really can't have enough of your fic!!!!

ps. I personally think you are doing fine and beta is not that necessary and will surely slow down the process.. hey! this is supposed to be fun, right? don't take it too serious, it's not a god damned thesis!!

Like this update very much. Looking forward to more of the same.
Glad that you are o.k. and didn't get hurt in the accident.

Rough fucking please.

Hephaistion = sexy horny loving bitch. I love it!

Brilliant plot idea. I don't think I've ever seen a idea quite like this one.

But may I suggest a beta?

Very nice update.

On the surface everything is so calm, loving, sweet and gentle.....but hearts are going to be broken soon...aren't they?


Looking forward to your next posting.

BAGOAS MUST DIIIIIEEE!!! MUAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAA!!! *ciugh* alexander's still an ass (to Moi) and get rid of trhe spell on Phai: i wanna see his reaction when he finds out!!! *sado-smile*

Cuuuute! More happy-family-time please!

this chapter is so worth waiting!!! Alexander is real dumb here, how can he not notice something was wrong!?!? anyway...it would be great if they have this happy family time when Hephaistion is his normal self!!

btw, congratulation for over 100 comments!!!! ^O^