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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good plot... i like it but PLEASE try and update dont be like other peps and write the first three chapters of a potentially good story then drop off the face off cyber space. so i reviewed when r u updating
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I've reviewed. Will you update now? I usually don't like 2nd person fics, but this looks interesting.
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This sucks you really do not know how to write.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what the hell i have been waitin so update already!
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok...sweet......i wanna read this....like really bad now.....i've got a story like this...its about interview with the vampire tho!!!! ok...so sweety...you need to update....thanks!!!! seems almost like a mary sue...but way cooler!!!!!!
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds really good so far. I can't wait to read the next chapter
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, sounds like this could be a very nice story. My only advice, if you want it, is not to rush it. Watch your grammar, don't make it too girly. By girly I mean, a story for the sole purpose of getting close to David, Dwayne, Marko and Paul, just because they're hot (and let's face it, they are). If you take your time, this could be a great story. I realize that some people might consider it JUST a story, but I take writing very seriously and I enjoy reading good, well thought-up stories. Please do update, I can't wait to start reading.