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MY DAUGHTER'S DIAPERS LEAD TO THE DARKSIDE!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH thats hilarious i love it

I love this! So CUTE and angsty yet happy in the end! I so love happy endings! And I bet the baby is absolutely adorable! Some of my favorite fics are the ones where Qui-Gon survives that fateful battle...and now this is one of my favorites. Great job! I SO LOVE THIS!

Well, first off, I'm not the biggest fan of pregnant men. I mean, I'm a man and I've never been pregnant, and I want it to stay that way. I don't see it as being very possible either. But hey, if anyone can do it, it's Obi-Wan!

Anyway, all hesitance toward mansex and manbirth aside, I thought the story was written quite well. You nailed Yoda's dialogue - I probably couldn't have done better myself. It was a nice romance; I did feel for Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon, which is what really matters. Very good characterization. Could have used a few more lightsaber fights and explosions and Wookiees, though.

I think the story could have done without Anakin, since he didn't really add anything to the story. Also, there wasn't too much description of places and whatnot, but I guess that's not really necessary for a story like this. All in all, good job! Nice flow and dialogue, nice drama.

CUTE!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!

Great fic. So sweet, love the ending most.

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