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April 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
its a great concept....liking this story a lot. i think its worth a finish.
take care
take care
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmm I wonder what is going to happen next, I hope you continue
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I say you continue, but for crying out loud, make it a Riddick/Jack pairing. Your story summary is deceiving.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this one. I think I've read it before, but I can never remember. Keep writing, I'll keep reading.
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far, I hope you update soon!
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Everyone wants you to continue with this story, including me. So far, you've written beautifully. Riddick and Jack are both very much in character (imho). I truly enjoyed the first two chapters and I wish you'd write more. Hell, even if you don't continue with this story, I hope that you'll keep writing. Great work.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the first chapter. It's nice to see how people take the relationship between Riddick and Jack. I'm not sure what I think of your OC, Caitlin, though. The second chapter is too short to get a real feel of her, but the whole thing has potential. It would be interesting to see this continue. :)
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story.
I love the growing attraction between Jack & Riddick.
Update again soon !!!!!
I love the growing attraction between Jack & Riddick.
Update again soon !!!!!