rate_review Reviews

GODS HOW I WISH THERE WAS A SEQUAL TO THIS UUBER TASTEY STORY!!!
You did good, hun. this was my go-to story for some M/M Edward Scissorhands after seeing the movie & imagining him without that leather suit! LOL!
I LOVE THIS PIECE!
if there was a possibility for a second one-shot to this, i'll hopefully be the first to read it. ^~^

The good points: I like the oc, which is rare. It's slash, which is hard to pull off in this fandom. It's finished, which is a feature that a lot of fics don't have. It's balanced, and although it has its faults, I like it.

The bad points: It's dismissive. A lot of the things that a lot of couples would see as obsticles to overcome, such as disaproving neighbors, this fic simply runs from, and that's something I can't agree with, especially considering Edward's pas experiences with his neighbors. I don't think this fic dealt enough with Edward's past relationship with Kim, and I think it would be quite a bomb to be droped on him to find out he was with a relative of Kim's. In some ways, it goes too fast. It glosses over important details. It makes the reader ask more questions than it gives answers to.

Overall, I was pleasantly surprised by this fic, but if there was ever a revised or extended version of it, I would be very interested to read it.

yea your right it is'nt easy.
you know what would have been good if her great grandchild was a girl,ya.
*sigh*

Great story. It isn`t easy to find good edward slash stories. I only wished it was longer.