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for Bungle in the Jungle

by dragonman

schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You mite want to break it up a little. It does get a little hard to read stuff when it's all bunched together. In all this was something that had both good points an a few low points too. I'm not saying you did horrible, but you mite want to go back an take a look at it an re-work a little of it.
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry but that is just terrible.
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schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person Sergeant Major
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
<3
person West
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VEry good. I have read all of yours stories and they were all very interesting. This is the best in my opinion, though. I want to keep reading these and eagerly awit your next one.
person Lidra
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um, a peculiar tale, but well-written. Email is above.
person DeaconFrost8
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very hot story. I've been waiting for some Lex fic. No offense but it gets a little difficult to read when it's in a huge paragraph like that. Otherwise keep up the good work!
person BlueCrow
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That is one hot beastiality story. Write more of them, ok? Very good

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