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by hellborne

schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really cute romantic story. I love it
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Squee! Yummy smut! xD Wonderful ficlet. Keep on truckin'. ^_~
person Angel Spirit
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Got to love adultfanfiction.net for the yummy slashiness of Jack/Will...and got to love authors like you willing to post fics for readers like myself who adore the pairing! Anyway, onto the rest of the review! Very nice one shot...^-~v I *loved* Will's first reaction to waking up naked next to Jack...*snickers* I'm sure the look on Will's face to Jack was probably *priceless* LOL, Jack's probably now forever in debt to his crew for his lovely Christmas present ;p
person Anon
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was great! really god work. I think you should write a sequel!
person Susan
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rather cute. :) I liked it!
person Fritz Lindemann
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to say... I'm speechless! Your portrayed the characters well given the situation and... wow! It was really good!

Sequel please! =D
person Ikkun
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A bit cliche. "I luv u." "OMG! I luv u, 2! I've luvved u all along!" Then sex and cuddling.

Been there, read that.
person Phoenix
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* That was hot. LoL. I loved the end with "Merry Christmas, Whelp."
person Triana
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aye e matey. It was a mighty fine story ye got there. Arr! Three cheers! *hurrumph*
It's was wonderful. Thanks.
person Tammy
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely completely friggin loved this story! Love these two together. Great visuals : )

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