rate_review Reviews

Ah, it just keeps getting better and better, it's wonderful how these serial stories have a noticeable improvement when someone is just starting out. It goes from being allright, few typos here, some grammatical errors there, usually due to typing in the late hours of the night or the wee hours in the morning as far as I can guess. Then as chapters or posts are added you see the improvement grow into something rather impressive, more gripping, more captivating, and it's pretty fucking rare that those words can be used in reference to a story on this site without some vulgar undertone. Especially, of all things, a friday the 13th adult fan fic... well... then again, if there were to be a fan fic involving sex and horror friday the 13th would probably be the best series for the job. Anyway, I pray my little story shows such improvement, provided I can beat myself into writing the next part.

Keep up the good work White Raven, seems oddly fascinating... oh, and just for clarifcation, saying you've improved doesn't mean you were horrible in the beginning so don't dare bring that up! :P Later.

DoR

dude this is an awesome story more please?

Oooo, niiiice... I very much like. Hurry it up!

Dude, where's my porn?

Improbable, yet I am strangely drawn to it. More please.

This is a very interesting story and i can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Now even though it's gonna be a little weird you're probably gonna have Jason experience something aren't you? And if I came to this site and to this section I was alredy gonna expect it. So the only thing I have to say isdon't take to long.