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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
I like this. I think it has very good potential, and I liked your description of the approaching dawn. I do suggest that you expand a little in terms of detail, but other than that I think it's wonderful, and I look forward to reading more.
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Poor Christine! It will take her a very long time to get over what happened to her, I'm sure. Come on, Erik! You have to get to Christine and help her! Good first chapter. I can't wait to read more. Update soon!!