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for Thy Enemy

by jade1981

schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
few problems I have with this story.... 1.... He's called the Key Maker not the Key Master and 2 the lyics are kinda a waste of space and time. I don't see how it actually directly effects the story....

Other than that it's awesome.... love the plot you have going
person random
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(bows and grovels) Please update!
person Yersi Fanel
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To be direct, I am here, begging you to continue whit this story, I just love it too much!
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the story had an interesting plot until you ripped off weiß kreuz. futhermore, aya was ooc and go find a beta. your grammar is horrible.
person Anon
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please continue?
this is a great story with a great plot. i really like it so far and i want to know what happpens next
person Anon
schedule June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
continue!! i love this!!
person Chiri
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I can't wait for you to continue. I love the twins, there arn't enough fanfictions about them. Yay for you! ^_^
person Indir
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Morpheus's ship is the Nebuchadnezzar.

This is interesting. Do you need a beta? I'd be more than happy to beta this for you.
person rubyred
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice..now get to the sex!
giggle..i'm thinking of a neo/link..what ya think?
person LunaBall
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*purrs* Twins....
^_^

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