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October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story but I hope you finish it soon
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is a good story where is the last part
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love this story can you finish it soon I want to read the rest it is just too good to leave unfinished
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey I loved this story hope you finish it really soon can't wait to read more.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It has definite potential but could use a beta reader to look it over. There are many grammatical errors and overall the fic is kind of hard to read due to format. Otherwise, I do hope to read more but hope that you edit your existing story a bit more.
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November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad for a first chapter. A little choppy is some places, so you might want to work on your flow, but I am intrigued and will be waiting for an update.
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think adding a title to the list should mean there should be some text o wio with it, not just a disclaimer. Just my oon, on, mind you. It was a bit of a disappointment to get nothing though.