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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The only bad thing I can say about the storu is that the ending, the fight with the phantoms, felt rushed.
Otherwise, I have no complaints what-so-ever ^-^
I'm glad that everything sorted out and we got a happy ending :D
And I hope you never stop writing, because this was very enjoyable and, simply put, GOOD ;D
Otherwise, I have no complaints what-so-ever ^-^
I'm glad that everything sorted out and we got a happy ending :D
And I hope you never stop writing, because this was very enjoyable and, simply put, GOOD ;D
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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh... *-*
Isn't this a gem?
I liked how you portrayed the characters in the beginning; how Riddick is disstrustful of and a little resentful to Vaako, and how Vaako still wants to be the best of use to his Lord.
And it's good to start slowly and then build it up on a solid foundation.
Now, I must go read more...;D
Isn't this a gem?
I liked how you portrayed the characters in the beginning; how Riddick is disstrustful of and a little resentful to Vaako, and how Vaako still wants to be the best of use to his Lord.
And it's good to start slowly and then build it up on a solid foundation.
Now, I must go read more...;D
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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my my... The changes are fun and it doesn't seem like you forgot anything. :D
Already at chapter three you can sense the budding relationship between Riddick and Vaako, and I like the fact tha Riddick doesn't have a 180 degree turn in the blink of an eye about his thoughts on Vaako. The build up is going nicely indeed :)
I can only hope you keep up the good work ;)
Already at chapter three you can sense the budding relationship between Riddick and Vaako, and I like the fact tha Riddick doesn't have a 180 degree turn in the blink of an eye about his thoughts on Vaako. The build up is going nicely indeed :)
I can only hope you keep up the good work ;)
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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the sexual tension in chapter four... It made me purr =(^-^)=
It almost makes me want to keep on reading instead of sleeping, but since I'm already sleep-deprived and I have to be up and going in six hours and tomorrow's an important day, I must leave reading your amazing fic to a later time ;)
It almost makes me want to keep on reading instead of sleeping, but since I'm already sleep-deprived and I have to be up and going in six hours and tomorrow's an important day, I must leave reading your amazing fic to a later time ;)
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
I really love your story. It's so totally sweet, hot, and full of suspense; all at the same time. It's also the only COR story I've come across that really gives a solution to the mess Riddick finds himself in.
I mean - he suddenly has the responsibility for not only an entire race, but for the whole effing universe thrust upon him. Surely that should be worth mentioning in a story... not an easy feat at all, I have to admit, but everything being all lovey-dovey just doesn't cut it, imho.
But you somehow managed to tie up all those loose ends the film left us hanging with in a mightily fine way. And did I mention the hotness?
And somehow, to top it all, everybody seems in-character, with minor (but believable) allowances made due to the development of the characters.
So - I hope I can look forward to reading more from you *hint, hint*!
Maco
I really love your story. It's so totally sweet, hot, and full of suspense; all at the same time. It's also the only COR story I've come across that really gives a solution to the mess Riddick finds himself in.
I mean - he suddenly has the responsibility for not only an entire race, but for the whole effing universe thrust upon him. Surely that should be worth mentioning in a story... not an easy feat at all, I have to admit, but everything being all lovey-dovey just doesn't cut it, imho.
But you somehow managed to tie up all those loose ends the film left us hanging with in a mightily fine way. And did I mention the hotness?
And somehow, to top it all, everybody seems in-character, with minor (but believable) allowances made due to the development of the characters.
So - I hope I can look forward to reading more from you *hint, hint*!
Maco
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September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing fic!
I was in awe through the whole thing.
You've got the best Riddick/Vaako smut. <3
I was in awe through the whole thing.
You've got the best Riddick/Vaako smut. <3
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!!!!! You shaved Vakko's HAIR!!! How could you???
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What an excellent story, staying true to the characters we know yet expanding on the universe. Well done!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEEE!!
That story was incredible. It was so... so... sheesh. I'm so happy now!
I was a little nervous there for a moment - things looked to be going bad and there wasn't much story left and I was all like.. OH NO!
It was wonderful, thank you so much for writing it!
That story was incredible. It was so... so... sheesh. I'm so happy now!
I was a little nervous there for a moment - things looked to be going bad and there wasn't much story left and I was all like.. OH NO!
It was wonderful, thank you so much for writing it!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heya! I just finished chapter 9 (which i mention because it annoys me to all hell that this site doesn't say what chapter hte review is from and I have no idea what the reader is joyful/angry about) I love your story so much! And that stupid stupid trying to take Riddick away from Vaako. Poor guy, i just want him to be able to be with the one he cares about. Great story (its always a pleasure when i find a fanfiction writer that understand the concept of a plot.)
Can't wait to read more!
Can't wait to read more!