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by JennyPugh

person Chelsey
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey I can't wait for the next chapters! I enjoy the 2 chapters at a time. The story seems longer and I like to read more at one time. Update s I h I hope Jenny and Jack see each other again soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*ROAR!* EVIL CLIFFHANGERS!!! *sigh* Even still... *deep breath* I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update more ASAP! ASAP! *grumbles about only getting a couple chapters a week* ^.^ And, to answer your question, I'd rather have a chapter every couple of days, instead of 2 once a week. Although, if I REALLY had it my way...^.^ I'd get a chapter everytime I checked for a new one. ^.^ Anyways. GREAT job, as always. However, a bit of advice: The Nomad incident is a bit confusing to me, and, if you have time you might look into explaining it a bit better. ^.^ Anyways. Poor Jack. Jenny's gone again and he's all sad and injured. *pout* Those damn tradsmen better work faster!! *giggles* Oke. Another great couple of chapters! Keep it up!!

*Kat
person Joe
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was soooo happy when I saw you updates! I cant wait for the next updtes....btw, happy pirate day!
person Frejia
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this is such a great story! It really really is *nods*
I love the way you portray Jack..hehem, sorry...*Captain* Jack Sparrow, I think you really hit the mark on that one :)
Please please continue this! I beg you! lol..
person Chelsey
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You evil Vixen! You spin the best tales and then you just stopthe the good parts. I'll get even I will. Count on it. ;)
Anywho great so far! I can't wait for the next update.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person Joe
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. What Sparrow Wants was one of my favorite stories for a long time, and I was sad when it ended....but then there was a sequel, and i was really excited! I was so sad when Jenny had the miscarriage, I really hope they have a kid....Id love to see how Jack yould re-act. WIcked nice story.....cant wait fer the next chapters....PS:Stupid people who beat Jack when he's piss drunk.they deserve to die!DIEEEE! Lol.
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHH!!! I LOVE THIS STORY! I've been (not so) patiently awaiting the arrival (or rearrival) of Jenny and Jack! I'm SO happy that you've finally posted up the new story, and I can't wait for more! So please update soon! Andnks nks for the very yummy (if not angry) dose of Jack!

^.^ Kat Carvell

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