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I certainly hope you plan on writing more. Obviously I'm not the only who thought Sarah was a fool for turning down the Goblin King.

*cackles* I like this fanfiction a lot. It is hilarious, oh, and I love the way you portrayed Jareth, very believable.

hee hee hee....that's funny. Love it. You might wanna double space your paragraphs, since there's no indent.

Lol! It's a bit lame, but I used David Bowie and Jennifer Connelly's real signs for my story. I know, I know, don't confuse the actors with the characters they portray, blah blah blah... But for all it's worth I can debate you over the star sign thing. Jareth could be a Capricorn as they are into the rich, glamorous lifestyle, and they are secretive and like to have the upperhand in relationships to cover up for their own insecurities. They are very sexual, and love drama and theatrics. They also exhibit a dry sense of humor, which Jareth is very good at. And you have to admit, Pisces is just too nice to fit Jareth's personality, and he's not whiney, which Aries ten be. be. We could argue a Scorpio case on behalf of the Goblin King - Scorpios are the ultimate sexual sign, and they love the arts. They are also secretive and will take revenge if treated unfairly. Hmm.... this could make for an interesting thesis paper... "The Many Starsigns of the Goblin King"...
Grr! Look at this! I'm writing about Labyrinth astrology when I could be working on the next smutty little chapter in this crazy lust saga! And so I will return to the task at hand, and let you decide Jareth's starsign for yourself.

Highly Cute.

Though, I don't really see Jareth as a Capracorn. I think he's more suited as a Pisces, spicifically the Pisces-Aries Cusp. In fact, I'm convinced his birthday is March 20th. He has the personality for the day (gernerally very talented in the arts, like singing and don't forget the freaky graceful stuf he does with the balls, not to mention they are very much into dreams). In typical western astrology, March 20th is literaly called the Day of The Labyrinth.

I don't mean to nitpic, I just thought you might it interesting.

LMAO. Oh my, that's hilarious. So OOC and it's so good as well. Goodness, can't wait to read more.

muwahahah evil sarah! pay back time muwahahaha!!

You know I don’t do this but you are evil you know that, I saw the new chapter listed and got all happy and it’s just an author’s note, I just had to say you are EVIL. School is more imported but I was so happy and no chapter, It better be a good LONG chapter when your done :-p

Come on now update you left it at a good part now HURRY please. And it's a great story.

OMG!!! That was the best one I have ever read....you are sooooo good keepup! up!