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by seraphina

schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story was awesome. But I noticed a few mistakes with your French. "Fuck Me" is "Baisez-moi", not "Baise-moi", it's a simple enough mistake, but without the z, it isn't fuck, but Kiss. =)

Aside from that, the story was a great one. Continue writing. I love it! <3
person kyoko
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved your fanfic...but i have a couple things to say(youve probably heard this a million times before)
i looked some of those phrases up on an online translator, because i didnt see that they were at the bottom, and i think that some are a little different than how you used them in the fiction, for example:
Baise-moi > when translated on babelfish > kiss me
and
putain de pirate> whore of pirate (or pirate's whore).
I guess it doesnt matter anyway, but I just thought I might tell you... oh well, other then those things, i really liked the fic.



person spangles
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
putain de pirate... means " whore of a pirate" putain is my favourite french insult...
person meli
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luv ur fic!!! i do hope 2 come across more of ur work!!!!!!!
person zoedalaw
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I adored this whole story >D It made me laugh so much because I just did my french exam a few days ago and we learned the passe-compose and the imparatif so when it asked for the third person of aller.. I was sitting there to myself saying "Il est alle" >D that's an absolutely wonderful story!
person Miya Sparrow
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, it was funny, sweet, cute and well slash me fav. but theres one thing I must say, Putain de pirate means whore of a pirate. at least I think it does *shurg* who cares LOL.
person biase-moi
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
. dont you think its odd that baise means both kiss and fuck in the french language though? i have always thought that amusing.
person Cat
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mahhhh...Jack/Will et le français...les deux sont parfaits avec leur-même. Merci mille fois.
Et aussi - je comprend completement parce que vous détestez le subjonctif. Je voudrais le tuer.
person Lisa
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! That was bloody Hot! *sighs* The hot Pirate getting some hot booty! Right, anyway write more!
person lala
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWSOMENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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