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for Bad Lunch, Good Dessert

by hellborne

person Beth
schedule July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful PWP!! Chocolate, mmmm.

Any chance the two lovelies might tempt Elizabeth with some chocolate? :)
person Georgie
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't stop staring at the computer screen! I'm honestly floored by your story! I love how you have facts and the like in there, and how there's an actual story instead of just sex. *even though that's really good too* The fact that it was chocolate was just amazing. I'll have to try Jack's little brew for my own. o^.~o

Thank you so much!! Keep writing!

X+Gee+X
person Lymicus
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I'm the first one to review this wonderful story. Well, all I can say is excellent work! I loved the bit with the mirror--very Jack-esque. Not to mention one tasty (pun intended) sex scene.

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