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by fadingprincess

schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Can I ask for more, please? I like that spin on the ending of the movie. Very Good. I can't wait to read more of it. Please add more soon!
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
I think that your story has potential, but it would be a lot easier to read if it wasnt in such a block. Do you upload your chapters or copy and paste them. I found copy and paste works better then you can see how your story will appear. Do you have a bet
person Kristine
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Well, whaddya know...Raoul is actually being quite mature. Definitely not how I imagined he would be...But then again, I'm horribly biased. :)
I am MOST definitely looking forward to more!! Especially how you're planning to make this NC-17...Is Chri
person Cheryl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy the way this is progressing...Very well done.
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm I am a little undecided about this one... Please write longer chapters with more character and plot development. So far so good... So keep it up!
person Lindsay
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, it has real potential, I hope that you continue it, I can't wait to read what happens....
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is spiffy! I like it! You have held true to the character of Raoul and I hug you for that. *hugs* You have done something many of us have been unable to do thus far. Please, continue with this story as it is. It seems to ring of a bittersweet lo
person angelgirl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad! Poor Erik! Update soon please!
person Skimbleshanks
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
This is really good!
Quite tender, but not mushy. Brownie Points to you!

Hope you update real soon!

Mwah, Luv Skimbleshanks!
xxxMeowxxx
person Aisling
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
more soon cya x

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