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April 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent! And it happens to be the first fic I've read where the agents are a love interest. Go you! Agent Smith was always my favourite character in the film.
Very good writing. Keep it coming. :)
Very good writing. Keep it coming. :)
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April 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! More of this kind of fic... we need more of this kind of fic... *dies* Yeah, agent nooky is something a girl can only dream of... This is a lovely story, and actually works as a story, too, not just as a sordid bonk bonanza, to quote something I once read in my English class... I love this. More? Pretty please? With a naked agent Smith on top?
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March 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Shiromori,
I do hope that you haven't gotten the mistaken impression that this is a serious fic -- it's not. I agree that the Canon-Agents would most certainly *not* take part in such activities! But this isn't Canon. If anything, it's AU. It's all meant for fun, and it's All About the Nooky. What little plot there is serves solely in support of the nooky. Sheesh, it's hosted on AdultFanFic.net! That alone should warn the readers how little the tale is going to adhere to Matrix-canon.
It's all in fun, but if you can't willingly suspend your disbelief and accept the premise of the story, then you're not going to enjoy it (and thus there's no point in reading it).
I do hope that you haven't gotten the mistaken impression that this is a serious fic -- it's not. I agree that the Canon-Agents would most certainly *not* take part in such activities! But this isn't Canon. If anything, it's AU. It's all meant for fun, and it's All About the Nooky. What little plot there is serves solely in support of the nooky. Sheesh, it's hosted on AdultFanFic.net! That alone should warn the readers how little the tale is going to adhere to Matrix-canon.
It's all in fun, but if you can't willingly suspend your disbelief and accept the premise of the story, then you're not going to enjoy it (and thus there's no point in reading it).
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March 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know, I love Agent Smith (he's the main reason I like Matrix), but, honestly, I could never see this happening. Agent Smith _hates_ humans. He tells Morpheus that he feels contaminated by them, saturated with the stink of them. He compares humans to a disease. Certainly, the thought of getting so close to a human, of soiling his body (such as it is) with one would be totally abhorrent to him.
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March 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow. almost unbearable. please follow up with another chapter.
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February 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nooo! good grief! what happened? would sarisa be a part of this as well at some point?
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February 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
«cuts red-ribbon»
I hereby declare this review-Haven as officially open!
And I leave you with a Deep Thought, conjured up by such magnificent reading - !
!
«waggles eyebrows»
I hereby declare this review-Haven as officially open!
And I leave you with a Deep Thought, conjured up by such magnificent reading - !
!
«waggles eyebrows»
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February 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lmao! That wieacheach me to read properly. I just saw Xan and presumed it was Xander from Buffy the Vampire Slayer, but once I got reading I was gripped anyway. Excellent fic. Luv Ditto xxoo