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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should definitely continue with this story. It's really good so far.
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I bet the girl is really ugly...
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the movie and always wanted to read a story about Marco being in love with his enemys sister, please write more as i cant wait to see if they get back togeather. Plus to see if Leon forgives her. Love it , love it, love it....PLEASE MORE SOON
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September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's nice so far. Really. I like the Romeo and Juliet storyline. The only thing that really bothers me is how Abby is a total 'Mary-Sue'. Maybe ease up on the...she's so beautiful...every guy wants her...beautiful...beautiful...theme. So she's attractive, we got it! But it's just not believable when every guy seems to want her, it's a bit annoying really. So stop that and I'll be completely hooked.