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Please, write more! I've been waiting ages for the next fewpterpters. This is a really sto story, but when I saw you said you'd stop posting because of low hits, I panicked. I beg you, please write more to this story. I saw Troy, and it's amazing to find someone so true to the story without making it trashy. You're a great author, and maybe I'll post one of my own stories, and I hope you'll read it.

Your Fellow Authoress of Troy, Ananda

So glad you are writing this!!! I have wanted to see this pair for such a long time!! I was even thinking of writing my own. I am impressed that you had all of the right lines in the second chapter. Good researching.
This story is going well, but i think the next chapter will be the one with most of the meat. The next chapter is when you will add most of you own ideas and interpretations. I am excited to see how you will lead the two of them. I dont know if this is being considered. But are you going to stay true to the movie? I personally dont care if you stray a little. Just keep the story hot and sexy!!
One piece of advice: It would be sooooo much easier to read if you put space between your paragraphs. Other than that well done.
Oh and i don’t know why but people at this site don’t review…. it can get really annoying. Like you said you are getting a lot of hits and no reviews!! I say just keep going with your story and keep asking for reviews. They will come. Update soon!!

Hey i love your story... i doesn't keep to close to the movie which is a good thing. It's a nice use of imagination and i look forward to reading more! <3

I love your story.
Write more.....

Pleeaaaseeeeee!!!!!!!!!!

Go ahead, you're doing a great job. :)

Keep writing! This is good! :) I look forward to the next chapter *prod prod*

Yeah it was good cant wait for the next chapter

Looks like a good story coming along here. I forget all the myths (aside from the "Big Horse, Big Killing Spree" aspect) and I haven't seen Troy yet so I'm open to whever the story is going ... although given where it's published I shouldn't be too surprised if the Virgin Priestess is put into retirement *rolls eyes*

Well seriously, who the hell goes into a tent with Brad Pitt and emerges a virgin? :P

This is great! I loved the mention of things like the smell of beeswax in the temple. Very nice. I hope you write more soon *pokepokepoke*