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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! You are soo mean to leave it there. Please write more. I am greatly enjoing this story, Can't wait for updates.
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please write more of this story!!! it really drew me in. i could almost feel MY heart beating like a goatskin drum!
your style of writing has a certain sophisticated feel about it that's beautiful but easy to read. MORE PLEASE!!!
your style of writing has a certain sophisticated feel about it that's beautiful but easy to read. MORE PLEASE!!!
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well I came looking for this fic and I think you're doing a fine job so far. Bri in in my opinion would be more interesting if we could get more of her thoughts and why she acts the way she does. But I like that you have stuck to cannon and there are some 'interesting' times ahead.
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Get thee to thy computer! KEEP WRITIN! si!
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July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you completely Rhea, unfortunately that's a direct quote from the movie, I didnt make it up :P
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really liked the first three chapters! when's the next up?
btw: achilles can't possible know that there are 5 continents. america and australia haven't been discovered yet. ;-)
btw: achilles can't possible know that there are 5 continents. america and australia haven't been discovered yet. ;-)
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this Your first sex scene...i have to say sex scene are fun to write. I have written a few and uwellwell they are "hot and sexy" good luck with yours. I cant wait to read it!!!!
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story so far! I wondered what the story would be like from Briseis' POV. Also, her and Achillies are my new favorite couple and obsession! I can't wait for more! Keep up the great work and hurry up with the next part! lol!
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June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm dying here! I can't wait to see what next...congratulations on doing a wonderful job with this ;)
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter keep updating