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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story, well done
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet and hot.... just how I like it ^^
I enjoyed this little scene, hehehehe
I enjoyed this little scene, hehehehe
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry, I forgot I've already reviewed ^^;;;;
forgive me
forgive me
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You spelled complete wrong.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Hot and sweet and full of juicy details!
That was good!
That was good!
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT, HOT, HOT, I'm burning! That was soooooooooooo cool!
Original and adorable story, but I really don't understand the nickname (Ma-chi, was it?)... where did you take it from? I never heard about it... maybe it's just me....
but I liked the story!
Original and adorable story, but I really don't understand the nickname (Ma-chi, was it?)... where did you take it from? I never heard about it... maybe it's just me....
but I liked the story!
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!! You should write more!!
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very exciting :). Hope you'll write some more like that :) Please? :D
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice ficlet. The only thing I didn't care for was the weird term of endearment you had Anakin use - 'ma-chi'? What the...? It sounds like the melding of Chachi and macho *shudders* Please take some advice and find something better, it will only help. I had several diehard SW and A/P fans read this and they all agreed, good story, terrible made up pet name.