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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
niiiiice :)
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(: I've got to admit, I was a bit surprised at the ending. ^_^ Since most of the ones I've read are outright graphic and violent or immensely fluffy. xD I loved it. Can't say I know how in the world you managed to compare Jack to an apple, but I think you did a great job. ^_^ Keep up the good work.
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a bad ending, i mean, it would have made a great chapter, if you'd continue the story, but this is just confusing which makes it bad