rate_review Reviews

I've just read Chapters 1-16--couldn't stop before that, that's how well the story grabbed me--but must stop reading now and get some sleep. This is one of the absolute top five Jack fics I've read, and I've read a LOT of them! I love your Jack, and I love the time you took to get the two of them to be really together. I also really appreciate the detail you have on the locations and the sailing. BRAVO! Can't wait to read the rest!!

You are such an evil woman. Sorry I haven't been checking much. I've been busy with school and all that fun. Oh well off to read Bittersweet.
HAAAAAAA!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

I just wanted to say.. That's one of the best fan fics I've ever read xD It took me a while to read since I don't get time on the computer much but it was well worth the wait. Fantastic job. ^_^

I have to say, I am quite impressed with your fanfiction. You've successfully shown Jack's more...erm..."private" side, if you will, while keeping him still in character. I congradulate you on this accomplishment. I look forward to your continuation of this story, good job on the current status of "What Jack Sparrow Wants." My friend is eagerly yelling "WRITE MORE!!!!!" while I smile and nod to keep dignity, though I can't help but think the exact same thing. Till later, hopefully.


-Sareka and crazy insane friend Tabi who keeps reading over shoulder....

Agggghh Ani! how can ye do that ter me! what a naughty girl ye be, leaving us with a cliffy.
the last 4 chapters have been great. just when i think i've come to the climax of the story
and i know whats going to happen, another twist comes at me. you really know how to
keep a reader hooked. i also really enjoyed the ultra descriptive elements in the last two
chaps. very anne rice-y. can't wait to read part deux. toodles! xoxo

I love this story! Just wish you would elaborate on more of the "heated" scenes, if you know what I mean...^_~ Looking forward to updates!!

fantastic

Oh do write more please! Please!? Those chapters were fab. I can't wait to know what the dress looks like, or what Valentine wants. (I think I spelled his name right) Update soon!

Until then,
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

You go girl! Once again you pulled through for all of us that crave this story! Alas my filthy house calls and I must answer. Tengo que irme! Salud! Your Spanish-challenged friend (but one who insists upon using it), Killer K :)

-.- Are you *trying* to make us going insane from the EVIL CLIFFHANGERS?! AHHH! *needs more Jack* Yes. More Jack. MORE JACK! PLEASE?!?!?! *pouts* >.> UPDATE soon. Please?! I'm VERY eager to read about what happens!! And for, ofcorse, more Jack! ^.^ Please update soon!
Much Love,
Kat Carvell