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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. this story is really amazing. ^^ Glad i found it. bringing together Boba and the love issue in one story is not that easy. :)
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is excellent. :) If anyone were to ever reach someone like Fett, they'd have to be stubborn as a Bantha and be able to see the man behind the Mandalorian mask. You did both quite well. I love I'lai. She's got the spunk to butt heads with him antch tch him in a battle of stubbornness. lol. Loved the exchange between him and Han("If I were, I would. With tongue."). He would so say that. And worse. *cackles* Great job! :)
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May 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
In each chapter, the writing gets better and the story moves along very well. Ivy moves from fight scenes to romanace to hot sex very well!
The first half of the last chapter seemed a bit rushed, tho. Rather than tell us that I'Lai is traing to be a shaman, why not write a scene showing us her training? The first half of chapter 8 reads more like an outline than a story. From the point where Fett overpowers his guard onward, the last chapter is terrific---love, action, and intrigue, all revealed rather than described.
I'm looking forward to the second part of the trilogy.
The first half of the last chapter seemed a bit rushed, tho. Rather than tell us that I'Lai is traing to be a shaman, why not write a scene showing us her training? The first half of chapter 8 reads more like an outline than a story. From the point where Fett overpowers his guard onward, the last chapter is terrific---love, action, and intrigue, all revealed rather than described.
I'm looking forward to the second part of the trilogy.