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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please keep writing more chapters this is a really good story. Not just smut (not that theres anything wrong with that ;)
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September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love it!
Update soon please!
Update soon please!
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHEN ARE THEY GONNA F***? DON'T MAKE US WAIT LIKE THIS~!!!!
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do like your story line and I do want to see the next chapter.
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June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sounds good so far. Lots of F-bombs (f-words). Hehe. Made me wince a few times. I like the roughness of Riddick. Please post more soon!
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I kinda appreciate the effort that went into this story but the he-said, she-said pov's from the Doc and Riddick are so similar. Instead of the doc's and Riddick's thoughts - it makes parts of the story feel like they are being repeated. I really want to see where this story goes but the characters have to possess more different views.
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very interesting story, I'm curious as to what would happen were you to write another chapter!
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hate to tell you this, but you can't call this a PWP, because it has a plot. : ) You write really well adn I am enjoying the hell out of this story, so write more!!!!
Friendlyquark
Friendlyquark
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really good!!! what's going to happen next?
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the new chapter.