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January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh more!!!
I am so curious now!!
please upload soon!!
ps. how do u know somebody updates?
do i get a notification?
i am new to the site
I am so curious now!!
please upload soon!!
ps. how do u know somebody updates?
do i get a notification?
i am new to the site
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!!! I loved it Keep it going!!!!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah!! it just stops! where'd it go? arg *pout* i was really likeing the story, all of your stories i have read have been really good! this is the first Riddick fic i've read and it sounds interesting. i like how you are switching between their view points and aren't making Riddick this sweet little thing that is put upon, that is used alot. i hope you continue and maybe explain everything some more... looking for ward to it... i offer chocolate pocky for you muse!!
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes I like your story and yes I'd like another chapter please. This story is great.
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this. Do you plan on continuing?
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cool story, you've written Riddick excellently. I'll be checking back for updates, but no rush tho.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! cool! must read more
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January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please keep going.
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, I'd like to see more of it.
One minor criticism though, it is tiresome to read through all of the dialogue twice, so if you can find a way around that while still getting Riddick's POV across that would be great.
One minor criticism though, it is tiresome to read through all of the dialogue twice, so if you can find a way around that while still getting Riddick's POV across that would be great.
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice start for someone who doesn't know Riddick or PB very well. I agree that the alternating POV's could be better served by showing how differently they perceive a given situation...or how their own personalities notice different things as priority. Otherwise redundancy will lose some readers. Other than that? Keep up the good work.
~Ali
~Ali