rate_review Reviews

I just came across your story and I love it! Really interesting I hope you post more soon!

well, i like it. bu it doesn't make very much sense to me. i know you said at the end of the second chapter that there was no real time frame or sequence, but i'm still confused. what happened at to him while she was visiting the oracle? did he leave the ship in the real world?
at any rate, your descriptions of what happens are very good. i really like the way you write. it's almost like prose poetry, in a way. i hope you plan to continue this story. i'll definitely be watching for any more chapters.