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"The water moved past her booverover her skin, through her hair and away, like hands running over her." I love this line. I can feel it and it has the tone of the whole piece, to me. I love the ship with a soul, and the way they speak to each other. It made me want to go see whase yse you've written. I look forward to more eventually.

Just a note to say, love this. I was wondering when I'd be hearing about the further adventures of Jack and Anna!

C.J.

Very nice. I've loved your character Anna since I first read about her. No Mary-Sue that one! I'm curious why you didn't make this a chapter in the other story...since the other story was where she told Jack that she wanted to learn to swim.

I definitely love your plotlines!

Hellborne

I'm interested - its well written. Do keep going.

I think it's cute! You should write another chapter if only for my sake. Read my story too please? It's called La Belle Rosa. Review too please?
-HisBeautiful-