rate_review Reviews

that is so good!youhavetorite more!

this is a good story. nice plot. keep writing.

I like the idea for the story, along with the story itself. However, it's written rather cryptically. Perhaps if you in details...descriptions...etc. I'm a very visual (and tactile) person, so hearing a simple narrative has never been what I consider fun...I tend to "watch" books (as if they were movies) and stories...and though your plot is good, I couldn't really picture it as it went along.

I am enjoying it though!

I love this story, Chica! Hurry up with the torture!

Yours Sincerely,

Dead_Sparrow

Good start....but, I am hungry for more......

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