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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please more!!! this is so good im hooked!!!
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more!more!more! this is most excellant!!!!!!
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is wounderfull i dont know where you get your ideas but i am so hooked please write more this is the best story that ive read in here! you have real talent you should keep writeing please keep writeing. oh by the way i love that you added bootstaps brilliant it was you are a wounderuos writer please keep writing this is beautifull stuff i am soooooooo hooked youve done agreat job i love it!!!!!
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is really fun. It seems to be going at the right pace, too. Please update soon
-travieso
-travieso
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ha ha ha
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mr. sparrow is so yummy
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(For chapter 4)
What an excellent part! I love the new developments and can't wait for more!
~Em
What an excellent part! I love the new developments and can't wait for more!
~Em
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was SSSOOO good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!When does Jack find out Brianna is a girl? I must have more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic beginning! Please update soon as I can't wait to find out what happens next. Excellent job!
~Em
~Em
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story with wonderful details. Can't wait to read more you capture Jack's character magnificently. post again soon, please.