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for The Treasure at Home

by abra

person Anon
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well wonder if that last chapter is going to be more significant than anyone realizes what decsions/actions will Hilliary take that will add more twist to the story?.
person SolitaryAries
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"She was acting like a frolicking filly in a harvest-time pasture" HAHAHAHAHAHA! I love it!r str story is so great! Sorry if it takes me forever to review. I hardly ever leave my happy Harry Potter realm over in the books section. But Chris Barrie is ALWAYS worth stepping out of my bubble :-D Thanks for the entertainment!
person Finmand
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great...greatgreat...I almost wet myself
person UKTara
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!
You're a very talented writer!
And you've just got to write more!
I love Hilary (Chis Barrie) and always liked the idea of him and Lara getting together.
You've GOT to write more!!
I'm gonna bookmark this and keep a regular check on it - don't disappoint me now, will you!!!!
:)
person Juno
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story gets better everytime I read bits you've added honey! Keep up the good work! xx
person Dani
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What else can I say? This is simply fab! I've waited for really good Lara/Hillary fiction, and this year hasn't disappointed! Can'it fit for the next ch!
person fayzalmoonbeam
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very yummy...well done! I love that you write in explicit terms and still make it sexy :) Keep going please-this has 'epic love story' (with good naughty bits!!) written all over it. Oh-one other thing-would you mind if I borrowed your idea of Hillary in the tree after riding to play around with in my next fic? It's such a sexy image... :) Please update soon!
Best wishes
Fayz x
person SolitaryAries
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading the first chapter, and BUGGER IF I DIDNT LOOOOOOOVE THE RED DWARF REFERENCES!!! So hard to cling to the sweet romantic side of it when you're busting out laughing!!! FANTASTIC JOB!!! *moves on and reads next bit...*
person fayzalmoonbeam
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is fab! I thoroughly enjoyed this. Your attention to detail is astounding. I hope that you are going to continue this fic soon, as I can definitely see the potential in some of the ideas you've set up. You've also inspired me to write some more Hillary/Lara stuff (might do that tonight!). One small thing (and it's purely a personal preference)-is poor old Hilly going to get the chance to get really carried away without having to withdraw? Poor man must be going insane by now!! *G*
person Juno*
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay you put the second half up! *grins*

Fantastic fic honey, there's not enough Lara/Hilary stuff out there if you ask me!

Xxx

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