rate_review Reviews

Such a lovely start to a fanfiction, though I fear, has it been abandoned? Even if it has been just the setting chapters have truly been a joy to read. Jack / Nor fanfiction which stretches beyond a one shot--and is well written--is certainly a gem to find. I've especially loved your inclusion of Nor's fixation on Elizabeth, I always felt he would cling to her, even if not openly.

Sweet!

Jack got a way with the Intersepter not the Dauntless. But oh well it is your story. I like it so far can't wait to read the next chapter I will get on that right now later.

I like it so far. Mostly because you are actaully making at a story. They are getting hard to find.

I hope you write more soon.