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August 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Loved it from beginning to end!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You really had me going there for a minute, I thought Jakc was really dead. This story was totally awesome.
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. Enjoyed it lots. Well fleshed out and interesting characters. Plus happy ending. Yay!
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In all my years of reading fanfics and stories off of the internet, I have never read such an action-packed, blood gurtling, edge of seat, yet romantic, cute, and comical story in all my life. It was so gripping, I took the hour an a half and sat down and read it straight thru. You r a very talented writer. Please keep up your writings, you're very good, and who knows? You might even be able to write a book someday.
Good luck with the rest of your work,
Silver
Good luck with the rest of your work,
Silver
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is great so far. I lvoed the history with Saia and ryan. Though you should have gone in even more when those two found out about Riddick and what her reactions were to Ryan's bro (they're twins right?) Anywho, wonderful story:)
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mari, you know I finally got around to reading this after how many months? LOL. Just wanted to go on record and s how how awesome I think it is. HuGs ~Misty
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March 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I would really like to read your story, although the default characters are driving me crazy!!! Did you upload the file using html? Perhaps you should try copying and pasting the doc out of word, might fix the character defaulting that is going on, its so bad that you can hardly understand what is being said. I am interested but I cannot read it, losing part of what you are trying to say by leaving the errors.
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March 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
noooooo! what happens next?! augh, trying to imagine what jack and riddick would...please continue