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person Jeremy
schedule July 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was really good. Thuroughly enjoyed how well represented the characters of both The Labyrinth and Kevin Smith's were. I don't know if Kevin would have had Jay admit to his homosexuality like that though. He prefers to keep it thinly veiled I think, but I truly think he would really enjoy reading this if he hasn't already. Good job.
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I realize I'm Really late commin in on this, but I just had to say: I'd fucking pay money to see this shit!
too fucking funny! I could totally see Jay and Bob in the movie, ROFL!
person Annie
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i liked this alot. i think you did really well in making it alot like the movies. love how well it was written. Great job.
person Lorilei
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NICE! I LOVED IT! THIS STORY WAS GREAT! And I'm glad you're not writing a sequel, cause as you said, why ruin a good thing? It had a nice clear ending, and there's no way possible you could find a way to justify a sequel. Anyway, great job! I loved this story the whole way through! Especially with all of Jay's wisecracks towards Sarah. Man, he's awesome.
person lise
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i came here with fear in my heart from the premise... but way to go! i laughed my ass off, it was wonderful.
person Danu
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was fucking hilarious!

You totally nailed the characters from both the Labyrinth and the Kevin Smith movies. I loved it when Dante said his famous "I'm not even suppose to be here today," and also the "fuckin' savages."

Very well done, I would totally send it to Kevin Smith. I'm sure he would get a kick out of it.
person TheWalrusWasPaul
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was fucking funny! Well done too! You really nailed the characters from Kevin Smith's movies. Wicked fic!
person missmaryrae
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, this story is hilarity! I was chortling the whole time. Very nicely written :-D
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was truly sick and twisted. I loved it, thank you for writing it.
person Quichi-the-Vole-Slayer
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You just made my Entire Day with this. You rock. This is Awesome.

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